My Lock Down 

 during lock down i went for a bike ride  and walk it was a good breather from being stuck in the house with my siblings.

it was fun because i haven't been outside in a while.

what have you been doing in lock down?

the dream

                     Thursday 26th August 2021        

                                 The Dream

As the bird closed its eyes and entered a world of wonder. Sinking into its mind thinking of that day that. The best day that has happened in a while all started with him and his friend. These two birds were commonly known around his hometown because they were the two best flyers in the country.

 They were about to go to the other side of the world to compete in the national bird flying competition. It happens every year. They would train non stop for this event. The happiness that this brought to the two of them Was incredible. they could never dream of anything else. So they started on their journey to the other side of the world. On their way, they saw the other team pass them in a hurry. But why were they going the opposite way of the competition? That didn't stop them though so they carried on throughout the day.

When they arrived they took everyone's breath away. Without a doubt, they were about to win. As their name was being called all you hear was birds cheering. This was a big surprise to them because they thought that no one knew them but it turns out that they were everyone's favorite. On their way back they were noticed by everyone that passed them they thought that they were amazing. When they arrived home they had a whole parade for themselves. 

Then suddenly he was being shaken and shook. Wake up, wake up. As he opened his eyes with bright lights in his eyes. Then there was a voice “don't worry we are taking you to help” the voice said in a worried voice. “What happened, “ he asked in curiosity. You fell from a great height when you were flying in the competition we think you might have broken a wing and your beak has fallen off. It turns out that the whole day was a dream!

By: Bobbi Larkins

 

Tauparapara

 https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1fG7Cr1D_rRZqvBA_WTAumXglZdgOCH3Jq1SDeyj0TQuw/edit

 multiples and factors 

i didn't finish all this because i didn't understand it .I feel like i did the 1st question well and something i didn't do well is understand what is supposed to be doing.I don't think that i will be using this technique in the future .

taekwondo master

💛 Taekwondo master

this book is about a boy who does Taekwondo

I didn't like it because there were to many words. i would not recommend this to my friends because it isn't interesting 

The Bag On The Desk.

 The Bag On The Desk.

It was a normal day at school and the class was all white it was a private school. It had black carpeted walls with fluffy rugs. Then the teacher put 

their bag on the desk. The paper bag was paper and light brown. Then the teacher left to go get a coffee. As she left it started to wriggle, there were big wriggles and little wriggles .

 Then suddenly a rat came running out. It was running around squeaking and squealing. Then Kaila and Ollie were really weird people. Running and screaming and then it died Because they killed it. Kaila was really sad. 

THE END

Great job Bobbi next time use different types of punctuation .nice job from Caleb

Good words you have chosen to add detail to your writing. I like the use of different sentence starters in your story. Next time you need to write more so that you have a longer story to add more suspense. 

The fox at school

 THE FOX AT SCHOOL 

One very snowy day there was a school on the hill. It was freezing but it was lunch so everyone was outside. suddenly it went dead silent and there was a big scream” fox!”(There was a white and brown fox). Then everybody was running everywhere. yelling” fox, fox, fox,”.

but no matter how far they ran the fox would follow them around and around. they would run into the bush and up trees but the fox would follow. suddenly the fox said something the kids were surprised and thought that they were hallucinating about things. so they started thinking and thinking about things to do(while they were in the trees and bush) so then they turned to the fox and said” what do you want from us”.and surprisingly the fox talked back and said” you are my only hope”.” what do you mean” they repealed. The fox said that he lost his family and he is too young to live without them.” how can we trust you?” they said with suspicion. you can’t really but I hope you can help me then the fox did the puppy eyes and they were sold so they took the fox into the bush and helped him find his family. THE END.

Kylahs feedback:i think this was really cool and interesting.