The fox at school

 THE FOX AT SCHOOL 

One very snowy day there was a school on the hill. It was freezing but it was lunch so everyone was outside. suddenly it went dead silent and there was a big scream” fox!”(There was a white and brown fox). Then everybody was running everywhere. yelling” fox, fox, fox,”.

but no matter how far they ran the fox would follow them around and around. they would run into the bush and up trees but the fox would follow. suddenly the fox said something the kids were surprised and thought that they were hallucinating about things. so they started thinking and thinking about things to do(while they were in the trees and bush) so then they turned to the fox and said” what do you want from us”.and surprisingly the fox talked back and said” you are my only hope”.” what do you mean” they repealed. The fox said that he lost his family and he is too young to live without them.” how can we trust you?” they said with suspicion. you can’t really but I hope you can help me then the fox did the puppy eyes and they were sold so they took the fox into the bush and helped him find his family. THE END.

Kylahs feedback:i think this was really cool and interesting.