The Bag On The Desk.

 The Bag On The Desk.

It was a normal day at school and the class was all white it was a private school. It had black carpeted walls with fluffy rugs. Then the teacher put 

their bag on the desk. The paper bag was paper and light brown. Then the teacher left to go get a coffee. As she left it started to wriggle, there were big wriggles and little wriggles .

 Then suddenly a rat came running out. It was running around squeaking and squealing. Then Kaila and Ollie were really weird people. Running and screaming and then it died Because they killed it. Kaila was really sad. 

THE END

Great job Bobbi next time use different types of punctuation .nice job from Caleb

Good words you have chosen to add detail to your writing. I like the use of different sentence starters in your story. Next time you need to write more so that you have a longer story to add more suspense.