Monday 30th august 2021
The Race
My heart was pounding as I rushed through the bike course. I Couldn't believe I was on the one and only biker extreme course with some of the best kid bikers in the world. Thinking about how I got here I zoomed past the checkpoint that I could have stopped at but my head was in who knows where so I had to concentrate as much as I've ever ha.so I could finish hard.
Near there I could almost feel the victory “sssssshhhhhh” oh no I blew a tyre .How am I supposed to finish my race now. I could walk but that won't work. They are already catching up. I know I could just keep riding even though I would probably break my whole bike. But I still kept riding through the finish line. I could feel the victory raining upon me. ok that's a bit advanced. But I am very pleased with myself.
As I went home I looked behind and could see the one and only biker extr
I cut myself of as I saw the sign mini track for beginners. What! I thought that I was good enough for that. So I broke my whole bike for a beginner track that little kids ride at. Wooooow that's a big disappointment .
By: Bobbi Larkins
Good use of exclamation marks and speech marks in this story Bobbi. Don't forget to send to myself or buddies to edit before uploading to your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Bobbi great stuff I can't wait to read your next post but make sure your capital letters are in the right place. Otherwise your blog Post is really good keep up the good work.
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